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missing punctuation
and ditch the crossed out stuff - unless someone like scott said to include it.
The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.
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Drop High School section. Nobody cares about that. Its assumed if no education is listed you have a HS diploma
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@Dashrender said in Resume:
missing punctuation
and ditch the crossed out stuff - unless someone like scott said to include it.
The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.updated
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I would really rework your experience section. No one really cares for paragraphs on a resume. So for the current role
Support Techician
RDS
April 2018 to PresentResponsibilities include; Remote System Administration, including hardware problem resolution with Point of Sales equipment including but not limited to sales terminals and printers.
Additional responsibilities include, back-end data administration and staff training on sales equipment.
Technologies used:
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@Dashrender said in Resume:
The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.
The goal is to get a better paying job. No one cares about the aspirations, education is great but certifications can show that you can learn. (I know you're working on those).
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@DustinB3403 said in Resume:
@Dashrender said in Resume:
The last line also seems awkward on a resume - at least to me.
The goal is to get a better paying job. No one cares about the aspirations, education is great but certifications can show that you can learn. (I know you're working on those).
yeah, I was thinking the same - the goal should be near the top of the resume - and be specific for each job you're applying for... when possible.
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Part Time Clerk
This section isn't relevant to what you're applying for, I would almost drop the entire section and simply replace it with something along the lines of "Prior work experience is not in my target field. Will answer questions if requested about it"
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@DustinB3403 said in Resume:
Part Time Clerk
This section isn't relevant to what you're applying for, I would almost drop the entire section and simply replace it with something along the lines of "Prior work experience is not in my target field. Will answer questions if requested about it"
This is a good point.
You're also young enough that only having the single job being listed likely isn't going to be an issue.
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I'm not familiar with US CVs, but I'm missing things:
- What are you good at regarding AD? GPOs? Audits? Usermanagement? Scripting? Tell 'em whatever you know.
- Ever fixed a breaking issue? Something that could harm your employers business?
- "Input menu data" ... no. "Normalized large amounts of data for POS systems"
- "Built a home lab network using Ubiquiti Networks PRODUCT A, PRODUCT B, ... to learn XYZ (hell, UBNT is such a good system. Why did you choose them? Price, features, ...)"
Hope that helps.
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Support Technician
Skills Used: Active Directory design and configuration, Windows Server 2016 - 2019 , Linux Servers (list distros here), backups , system support, workstations (Windows 10 and Windows 7 Migration), customer training, Networking configuration (Ubiquiti and Unifi), System updates (Windows and Linux)
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Experienced in configuring and troubleshooting servers, workstations, printers, terminals, and POS systems
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Managed and configured (not sure if you configured or not) VPN connections to remote sites
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Responsible for customer training in various areas including best practices on workstations, servers, and system backups
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Software Development experience with POS systems. I designed custom menus and GUI components to fit customer needs
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Skills section can be updated;
System administration, including hardware and system software administration and troubleshooting
Remote system administration
Domain administration services, including Microsoft Active Directory
Customer Service via help desk administration
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Remember: Build your resume for the job you want, not the one you have.
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You could easily add a technologies proficiency area onto your resume.
Proficient with these tools:
(whatever software tools you use, Vi, SSH, Putty, Windows Server, Linux Server, Hyper-V) etc
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Support Technician
Skills Used: Active Directory design and configuration, Windows Server 2016 - 2019 , Linux Servers (list distros here), backups , system support, workstations (Windows 10 and Windows 7 Migration), customer training, Networking configuration (Ubiquiti and Unifi), System updates (Windows and Linux)
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Experienced in configuring and troubleshooting servers, workstations, printers, terminals, and POS systems
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Managed and configured (not sure if you configured or not) VPN connections to remote sites
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Responsible for customer training in various areas including best practices on workstations, servers, and system backups
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Software Development experience with POS systems. I designed custom menus and GUI components to fit customer needs
Remember his job has no actual servers in it, no Linux, and no real developement. Entering data into a system to generate a menu hardly seems like a dev thing.
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@Dashrender said in Resume:
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So he does system support
I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job
I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution
Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense
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@Dashrender said in Resume:
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So he does system support
I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job
I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution
Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense
Remember, he's 23. No one expects him to be like Tim Berners-Lee.
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@Dashrender said in Resume:
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So he does system support
I am sure he has touched windows server before on the job
Not very likely - the sell windows 10 as a server solution (likely illegally)
I am sure he has worked with backups, even if its just using a SaaS solution
I suppose it's possible - but again, it would be inside of the POS app, not likely outside it
Also if he is using VPN to connect to remote sights then he is managing the connection in a sense
That's a stretch, and you know it
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@WrCombs what remote connection tools do you use regularly?
