Resume Critique
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Feedback appreciated
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-Zj7y7G1-C_QWVCTDFUR0xQbkk/view?usp=drivesdk
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Some small bank has NMAP scanning twice.
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I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
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@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
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@gjacobse said in Resume Critique:
@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
That may just be Google Docs. I know when I upload to onedrive or Google Docs formatting is weird sometimes.
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@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
@gjacobse said in Resume Critique:
@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
That may just be Google Docs. I know when I upload to onedrive or Google Docs formatting is weird sometimes.
Very easily could be... Good spot
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I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
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@gjacobse said in Resume Critique:
@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
Hmmmm.. Not a bad suggestion
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@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
I am not sure that many IT jobs or cities exist in WY
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Do you think having the confirmation numbers and dates is necessary for the certs? If I dropped those I could probably make the certs have two columns and possibly get my resume to one page after dropping best buy.
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@gjacobse said in Resume Critique:
@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
@gjacobse said in Resume Critique:
@dustinb3403 said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove the information about best buy, is it relevant to what you're applying for?
Agreed... and most times you only need to go back ten years.
Need to drop A HIPPA Company to the second page
I go back till my first job, always. It shows your total time in the industry. Given that some jobs specifically want more than ten years of experience, you certainly don't want to be limiting to that.
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@irj said in Resume Critique:
Do you think having the confirmation numbers and dates is necessary for the certs? If I dropped those I could probably make the certs have two columns and possibly get my resume to one page after dropping best buy.
No, I generally leave those off. No dates either. A cert is a cert.
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@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
Yeah, it's redundant.
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@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
Yeah, it's redundant.
So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before
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@irj said in Resume Critique:
@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
Yeah, it's redundant.
So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before
No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant
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@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@irj said in Resume Critique:
@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
Yeah, it's redundant.
So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before
No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant
I've never been there, but I am going to guess that there aren't many IT jobs and probably very few if any large companies based out of WY.
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@irj said in Resume Critique:
@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@irj said in Resume Critique:
@scottalanmiller said in Resume Critique:
@stacksofplates said in Resume Critique:
I'd remove Shit Hole, WY. Not good form
Yeah, it's redundant.
So leave out city/state for different jobs? I've had potential employers and recruiters ask me location wise where I've worked before
No, I just mean that Wyoming and Shit Hole were redundant
I've never been there, but I am going to guess that there aren't many IT jobs and probably very few if any large companies based out of WY.
NTG is from Wyoming! (Wyoming, NY.) The one that the state is named after, I believe.
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@dominica and I got married in Wyoming, NY, actually.
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Anything else jump out to you guys?
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The following recommendations have been made:
- Make certifications two colums and remove dates and certificate ID numbers
- Remove duplicate entry of NMAP Scanning
- Remove Best Buy details. Leave job on resume
