Resume Review
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Too many bullet points for one job IMO. You got lost reading it. The formatting is somewhat bland and the text is too small.
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I think the top of each of these should be a one line job description. I never like seeing bullet points without a header. What are they a list of and why, why would I read a list not knowing what the job was?
First bullet: Make that something like a description...
Technician providing on-site and remote small/medium business support.
NY and LI makes no sense as LI is in NY. It sounds weird.
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I have some suggestions, but you need to enable copy and paste. I am not retyping everything out.
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@IRJ Made a editable one here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tpYqo6AmlwPesHFjTyko0uTPB0FurqtNY5Mk9FYkN8I/edit
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@scottalanmiller That sounds good, so for $company1 should i put "Sole IT staff member for two site manufacturing facility." as the header?
Now that you mention it listing NY and LI does sound silly.
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@unwiseapple said in Resume Review:
@IRJ Made a editable one here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tpYqo6AmlwPesHFjTyko0uTPB0FurqtNY5Mk9FYkN8I/edit
Thanks I dont need to edit. I just wanted to copy and and paste.
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@IRJ Does it work for you now?
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Tighten this up. More like...
- Admin for AD and GPO on Windows Server 2003 - 2012 R2 and CentOS mixed domain with ~270 workstations.
See if you can make that one line. Don't sell DNS and DHCP with AD and GPO. Different levels of complexity, don't try to brag about DHCP, it belittles the good stuff.
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About a word too long to be a one liner. I will work on it.
Makes sense regarding DHCP and DNS.
Thinking about it, its incorrect for me to use GPO. I should be using GP. I made that change.
Any advantages/disadvantages to using/not using acronyms. ie.. AD vs Active Directory?
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@unwiseapple said in Resume Review:
About a word too long to be a one liner. I will work on it.
Makes sense regarding DHCP and DNS.
Thinking about it, its incorrect for me to use GPO. I should be using GP. I made that change.
Any advantages/disadvantages to using/not using acronyms. ie.. AD vs Active Directory?
Yes, GP is better.
AD is short and very well known. I think that it is fine.
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Sounds good.
Have a question regarding fonts, any in particular nicer on the eyes? I tend to use times new roman but wonder if there is something better.
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Times New Roman and Georgia are pretty good.
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Sounds good, I will probably stick to Times New Roman then. Size 12 is common correct?
Anyone else with any recommendations?
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I think anything 10 - 12 is normal.
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Yup, 12pt is good. Whatever gives you one full page without spilling over.
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Recent changes:
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To make it a one liner on Times New Roman Size 11.
Any recommendations on how to make the following a one liner?
I also have changed the heading with my name and info from 4 lines to 2 as it just seems like a lot of wasted space up top.
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@unwiseapple said in Resume Review:
Recent changes:
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To make it a one liner on Times New Roman Size 11.
Any recommendations on how to make the following a one liner?
I also have changed the heading with my name and info from 4 lines to 2 as it just seems like a lot of wasted space up top.
"Developed bash script that manages email to comply with document retention policy." That still gets the point across and would only be one line.
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@stacksofplates Yup that works thanks!
@scottalanmiller Heres my attempt on making the following a one liner
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I don't state the versions of CentOS, so why should i for Windows Server. Is there any value lost by removing the version numbers?
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@unwiseapple said in Resume Review:
@stacksofplates Yup that works thanks!
@scottalanmiller Heres my attempt on making the following a one liner
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I don't state the versions of CentOS, so why should i for Windows Server. Is there any value lost by removing the version numbers?
As long as you state the versions in your skill list, remove them here.
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@scottalanmiller I do sate the version down below on my technology summary.
If anyone could help me shorten this, that would be fantastic. Im about 2ish words too long. Its currently just barely 3 lines and i would like it down to 2.
If i remove department and VMware it fits on two lines, but would love to hear some opinions.
